The Official Writing Challenge
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I'm not sure if a hand-drawn note is the same thing as a letter, but I like how the story played out. Your title caught my interest, and I like the message you presented. Good job!
Kids can be so mean. Every class needs a hero like Davey. This is a great lesson as we hear more and more about bullying. Davey's mom is right fighting isn't the answer but still someone needs to stand up for the underdogs of the world. Nice job.
11/06/10
Nicely told. I liked the marshmallows in the cocoa
11/16/10
This sounded very realistic to me. And I agree...a very timely topic with bullying so prevalent in the world today. Great job!