The Official Writing Challenge
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10/28/21
This is so beautiful! Thank you.
I could relate. I have little grandchildren, as well. And I still recall and vividly remember my children's childlike years. Some. I miss them all so much.

Again, thank you. Blessings!
You've written a beautiful, evocative story. I could smell the cut grass in the summer air, see the pale blue eggshells in the pudgy hands. It is motivating to always prioritize family.
10/30/21

Wow! What a sharing moment! A while ago, I received a video from our daughter showing her daughter, Keziah [4] and son, Nehemiah [2] dressed up appropriately as Queen and king respectively!!!
The articles, ably epitomizes the grandeur of wonderful nature
and God's abundant gifts to us.
Well-done!
I enjoyed your story of gentle love.
Congratulations!
11/07/21
Congratulations on first place. I enjoyed the comparison of the gentleness of your grand-daughter and the world we live in today. And the challenges our children will face in the future.
Thank you for this piece.
This is so sweet. I could really picture it easily. You pulled me in right away. Remember to start quotations with a capital letter. You've a lovely message and you did a great job of writing on topic. Congratulations on your EC. Happy Dance!