The Official Writing Challenge
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Very funny. I loved the voice your character had. I give this one A+!
A wonderful rambling commentary. I loved it though I was har put to find the link to the topic. Being a teacher I appreciated the comments about dumbing down the maths exam.
This is hilarious! I laughed all the way through; what a wonderful job you did on this narrator's voice! It may have been weak on topic, but it's a first-rate piece of writing. Good job!
This was delightfully funny, but 'fess up, it had to be written by a guy, right? What makes it sound that way? The phrase "but when Lesters wife makes his mind up, its pretty much set in stone." and your ending. I didn't understand one line, though: "Lesters God-assigned name is Skinner too, but he was never really a handsome man by worldly standards."

I thought about the oldtime radio show Amos 'n' Andy when I read this piece! It was weak on topic like the others said, but would be one I could read aloud to my family.
This is a brilliantly fun read! It had so many lines that just made me chuckle. Loved the botched description of current events. Very enjoyable!
Kinda reminds me of Andy Griffith's old stories...very comical. Jack Lemmon one of the Beatles? ha to laugh.