The Official Writing Challenge
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Very vivid imagery and some great turns of phrase. I'm not great with sci-fi/ fantasy but you really held my attention
Great writing here! With so few words to work with, your reader is forced to create a "back story" for this world...could be frustrating for some. I really appreciated your way of helping your readers get into Nash's head and heart.
Your story captured my attention immediately and kept me reading until the end. I'm not a fan of science fiction but your writing is excellent. I'm still not sure what exactly was going on but I found myself wanting to read more. Good job.
Well done! This is an excellent piece of writing.
Whew - high energy - great descriptions - wow!