The Official Writing Challenge
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I can tell you really experienced this...cause I felt all my old angst right there with you LOL
Thanks for sharing. Blessings
This is a great take on the topics. I think you did a wonderful job of pulling them both in. Perhaps there could be a way or two to make the story pop even more with more conflicts, some disagreements, people showing more passion in their beliefs. You have the start of an outstanding conflict that will make the reader stop and really think. Good job.