The Official Writing Challenge
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04/15/17
Even though we do not like bees and insects, God has a purpose for them all. You have a good imagination and your story is well written. God bless! LaVonne
You had my heart pounding the entire time. The pacing was on point and the suspense splendid. I almost expected the mad scientist to be artificial at the end, but I like your way better. The feeling of helplessness speaks volumes. Congratulations on ranking 2nd and on your EC! Happy Dance!
04/26/17
Very nicely done. Great example of man's arrogance going to far.
04/26/17
Congratulations, JC, on placing 2nd place in the Advanced category and 6th place overall.

Kind of scary knowing that man is cloning all types of organisms. I am glad God is in total control. Very well written.