The Official Writing Challenge
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Very well written with the rhyming words seeming to come naturally.

The twist at the end just seems to come unnaturally rude.

Nice writing. I like your style.
Fun story well written, and you can just imagine her stress putting together such a lovely meal. But the husband should have made his announcement much earlier BEFORE she had gone to all that work, and the mess would still be there to clean up when they came home! Apart from timing issues, well done.
I love this. It flowed nicely and is a brilliant twist to the familiar Martha story. My only suggestion would be to change the title so the reader is surprised by the modern Martha. Even though poetry isn't my favorite genre, this is one of my favorites this week!