The Official Writing Challenge
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02/18/16
I teared up at the end of the story. I am thankful for those who serve to keep us safe.

Well written tale.
02/22/16
Well done.
02/23/16
This took an interesting twist at the end. What a great reminder of the value of our furry friends.
Well Done
02/25/16
Congratulations Loni on winning 1st place!
02/25/16
Congratulations, Loni, on your 1st place in the Advanced Category.

I knew you had a winner with this story!
Well done Loni on keeping the real identity of Benjamin a secret until the end. And thanks also for your encouraging comments over my first few weeks being in the challenge!
Congratulations on ranking 1st in your level and 16 overall. Happy Dance!
02/26/16
Congratulations Loni on your top spot placing. I enjoyed reading your sad, but true story. Great for the topic too. Well done!
Congratulations, Loni, for your placements for this descriptive hero's tale. I liked the development of your revelation of Benjamin's identity.