The Official Writing Challenge
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08/06/15
Great job with the topic. WOnderful story, loved the last line.

God bless~
Oh your humor is divine. I think writing I a diary was a stupendous way to give your character depth. I can't tell you how many times I smiled and giggled. I'm glad you remembered the come after My dearest diary, otherwise it would sound like your diary was on vacation. The thought of it made me giggle. I also appreciated the Happy Dance thrown in. ;) I could relate to the MC because I've been in hospital while hubby had to take care of me. I'd groan when they came in with hair not brushed and mismatched clothes. At least, most people would realize instantly that I was in the hospital. Thanks for the giggles.
08/12/15
your fragmented sentences and choppy diary lingo give perfect insight into the personality of your MC! I loved this one:) clever and charming.
Congratulations on a wonderful story!