The Official Writing Challenge
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This is really lovely. I felt like Jesus was speaking directly to me.

I noticed a couple of typos in the 3 stanza and 3 line you had your instead of you're and later you had Hear instead of Here.

This is a well-written piece that just flows off the screen. You did leave me with a beautiful sense of hope.
I loved this sweet read, it touched my heart...Thank you.

God bless~
Hi -

This is exceptional in heart stirring content. I love the title, too.

Please note:

The last stanza - the word you should be your.
An encouraging poem of assurance that lets us know whatever risks we may have to take to follow Christ, they are all worthwhile. Good job on a well written piece.
Maybe I'm not so strong on poetry, but apart from the typos and some rhythm changes, I sese God's strength and comfort coming through.