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A sound message and I appreciate the simple flow to the overall piece.

There were a few places where time references were confused (using "have" instead of had), using a present tense verb when you are talking about a past tense situation. Also, not sure you needed to isolate te scripture reference in the beginning since you re-state it later in the story. I think it would have been fine to just start with the story itself.

Overall ... nice work!
Loved this especially the prayer at the end! God bless!
Beautiful message and outstanding ending. Nice job. God Bless~
Well said. Amen and amen!!
This is lovely. The scripture is a perfect fit for the topic and you built upon it nicely. Earlier I read when caught between a rock and a hard place, always go toward the Rock (Jesus) This reminded me of that as well.
Very positive and biblical approach to a vexed question.
Congratulations for placing 9th in level 3!