The Official Writing Challenge
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What a poignant, heat wrenching story/poem. Every parent who has lost a baby will be touched by this (although it was your sister). The image frozen in time by a photo. God bless!
You blend wistfulness, grief, hope and respect with skilful simplicity. Excellent work.
Just beautiful! Love it and it truly captures the truth of how much better our eternal lives will be when we never have to say good-bye! Thank you for this!
Congratulations on being chosen as the winner this week. This was a touching story that pulls on the heart strings. God Bless you~
Congratulations on placing first at your level! An excellent poem that touches the heart. God bless.
Excellent, well-crafted poem! I believe you have captured the sentiment of both the earthly sorrow of death and the heavenly anticipation of seeing a loved one again. It was inspiring and a hope filled message that is well deserving of the honor of 1st place. Congratulations!
Simply beautiful. Heartbreaking yet filled with hope. A poem I'll remember. Congratulations on placing 1st.
Congratulations Linda on your win this week. It is certainly a well deserved one! This is one of the most touching pieces I've ever read and is certainly something I plan to share with friends and family. Thanks for sharing something so personal with us and lending your deft touch to the crafting of such a beautiful work. You are a true artist.
ongratulations on a very well-deserved win.
Beautiful and congrats! You've been on fire lately, I'm so glad that fire was lit in the most unexpected way. Keep it up!