The Official Writing Challenge
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Interesting story. Good dialogue. Thank you.
I just love your stories. You write what I like to read-- about realistic characters that could easily be someone I know. You do such a good job of pulling me into the story and long for more. Yet this story easily stands on its own merit. Great job!
Once again, you pulled me in with the high drama and intrigue. The dialogue was strong. The complete story line is great and Ican't wait cuz' I know the climax is just around the corner. Well done.
Great suspense! This story is FILLING me with anxiety for both Jim and Rachel. I am SO grateful there is one more story to read until I'll have to wait another week in complete frustration! :)