The Official Writing Challenge
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This is beautiful. You paint a lovely picture of father and child, God and human, but also friend and friend.
Nicely written poem. Certainly covers the topic well. A fine example of a life-long walk with God. Blessings. :)
10/22/10
We should all have more intimate encounters with our Father such as this.

I liked how, 'she listened more, and talked less' as the conversation grew deeper, and more meaningful.

Perhaps I can take a lesson from this, for many of my conversations with Him are cluttered with the sounds of my own voice.
10/25/10
Yeah, a poem. I was just thinking that there weren't too many poems this time (at least in Advanced). Lovely poem with a great message. I liked the conversation between God and the mc.