The Official Writing Challenge
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I love a horse story, This was so well written. I enjoyed the histronics of owner and horse. You portrayed the breaking of both very well. Wonderful title! Blessings to you, Ruth
Spacing is a little off for some of the paragraphs, but it's well written! Kudos!
I enjoyed the similarities between the owner and the horse. And as a fiery redhead myself you did a good job describing the temperament that seems to go along with red hair.
Being a writer of Children's stories, (and published, too) you can imagine some of your words were way over my head...(*.*); however, I really enjoyed the story of "Soul". Very well written, (perhaps a strange format), but a nice job and delightful read!