The Official Writing Challenge
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This was well-written and suspenseful--but it frustrated me! What did she discover?
This was a well-written entry, but I found the ending a bit of a let-down. However, we can't exactly control how true stories end up. Good work on this!
Very well-written! I too was left wanting to know exactly what the siblings discovered! You have the makings of a book here; go for it! Blessings, Cheri
Definitely novel material here. I sniff a greater mystery than just this here. There's good suspense and good characters. Quite a feat in so few words.