The Official Writing Challenge
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This would make a great devotion. You did a nice job of delivering a clear message while writing on topic. My one piece of advice might be not to mention the topic word so much. Some of the strongest pieces can be on topic without ever mentioning the topic word. You did a nice job of bringing it full circle and I could easily see this as a devotion for FW daily devotions. Good job.