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04/29/21
I loved the message of your article. Give glory where it is due just like the rest of God’s creation does.
04/29/21
This is very moving. I didn't see anything grammatically incorrect or needing any punctuation changes. What I found was a piece that held my interest from beginning to end. It brought my own memories of almost daily thanking God for his beautiful art work; thanking Him too for the majestic home He has provided for us until we go to our Heavenly home. Thank you for this article that gave all the glory and honor to our Lord and Savior. Well done!
04/29/21
I really enjoyed your entry and how you aligned your scripture references with beautiful descriptions.

Setting the record straight indeed. Well done!
04/29/21
I appreciated the message of this piece but have no idea who Greta is and what she is saying to politicians. What am I missing?
04/30/21
Thank you for your article. I love the Scripture references; we have so much to learn from nature. Keep writing.
I think you did a nice job of presenting your message. I like devotions that start with a real-life message to which many can relate. I disagree a bit about the beginning bit on the purpose of Earth Day; it's not about praising created things and giving credit to leaders. It started in 1970 to make sure we respect the beautiful earth God created for us. I do agree it can get political and that's not good at all. Your penultimate paragraph was a great example of why Earth Day was created. I also think that Greta Thunberg is an awesome example of being a steward of the Earth. Jesus said, Let the children come to me. Sometimes kids can be wiser than many adults. I enjoyed your poetic description of the tree. You painted an awesome picture with your words. I also like the Scriptures you used. They were a perfect fit for your message. Your ending is powerful and makes the reader stop and think and have good conversations. That's always a good accomplishment for an author. Your passion to spread God's love and message is powerful and touches my heart.
05/05/21
I enjoyed your article very much. You made some great points by using scripture.

Thanks for sharing your thoughts!