The Official Writing Challenge
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05/07/15
Always to Him in prayer!

Thanks for sharing, well done.

God bless~
This is quite lovely and is a great message. I noticed some little things that a good proofreader would help you catch such as ellipses should only be three dots or the dots and a period if at the end of a sentence. I noticed in the beginning you had to instead of too. You did a nice job of writing on topic. Your words were a comfort to me and felt familiar like God was speaking directly to me. Nice job.