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TITLE: Truth Be Told | Previous Challenge Entry
By Mildred Sheldon
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Ramon all looked at Kurt shaking his head before he spoke. “Scalawag! Look who‘s talking. An old reprobate who has the mannerism of an old goat”
They looked at each other and laughed joyously. Kurt sipped his coffee with his eyes dancing merrily. “Ramon can you believe what happened recently? Crystal and I are still in shock. We can’t believe that the President of our Homeowners Association could do such a thing.”
Ramon sipped his coffee and cleared his throat. “Kurt the sad part is we wouldn’t have never known what was going on if that young couple hadn’t ran for President of our Homeowners Association and won. When the books were audited that is when all the duplicity came to light.”
Kurt adjusted himself in his seat. “Ramon everybody was fooled and didn’t suspect a thing. They held that position for 15 years and would still be in power if not for that nice young couple taking over. This old world is changing my friend.”
Ramon looked around the coffee shop and shook his head. “Kurt it is just like the Bible says. II Timothy 3 :5 says it so well. I’m far from perfect and I can’t judge rightly. I leave that in God’s hands, but to be so deceitful and cunning all those years. I guess I’m getting old my friend because I sure didn’t suspect a thing.”
“Ramon my friend I’m with you. I don’t understand as well how some can hide their true selves. I think II Timothy 3:1-4 describes this old world perfectly. When their deceit was uncovered they acted as if they hadn’t done anything wrong. That is what upset me more than anything. They used the money for their own gain.”
“Kurt, I think from now on our community will be more vigilant of the goings on around us. The old devil is running rampant to and fro over this earth causing dissention and anything else he can.”
Well, Ramon Crystal is expecting me at home so I guess I had better finish my coffee and hit the road. Crystal has something planned for this afternoon and I don’t want to disappoint my honey.”
“I know what you mean Kurt. Louisa is expecting me as well. Her and Crystal have something up their sleeve. They’ve had their heads together lately and when we walk in they shut up. Oh, before you go please let me know what it feels like when you hit the road.” Ramon threw back his head and roared.
Kurt placed his hands around Ramon’s throat and laughed as well.
“Ramon, you bring joy into my life and I'm so thankful to have a friend such as you. Well, Ramon I will see you again so enjoy the remainder of the day with your lovely family. Adieu my friend.”
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Cheers.
Work a bit on comma usage--and at one point, it reads as if you have a character sipping coffee with his eyes.
I enjoyed the relationship between these two friends--a pleasant read.