The Official Writing Challenge
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You make some great points and deliver a clear message. You are definitely on topic. Often some of the most powerful pieces are ones that never use the topic word or use it at most once or twice. If you go back and count, I bet you'd be surprised how many times it is used. I especially enjoyed your retelling of Daniel. You could have focused the entire article on just him. Maybe even consider retelling it in a creative nonfiction Bible story to make it pop even more. You have a nice way with words and I can feel your passion to share the Bible with others. I think you did a nice job of paraphrasing the verses too and think you could do an awesome job with creative nonfiction.