The Official Writing Challenge
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This is a lovely piece. You do a great job with the rhyme. It was on topic and had a clear message. Good job.
Spot on topic.
Spot on with the Savor's redemption.
Your opening lines drew me in and that was clever as I rarely find poetry drawing me in :).
Unless it's a bit of a frolic. Which isn't always applicable of course.
It seems poets have a special musical chord which they hear and follow as they write.
I hope we see more of your writings.