The Official Writing Challenge
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09/05/19
This kept my interest with it's folksy tone. I question the capitalization of No and Stoning, and the use of 'went' in last paragraph, but other than that, I'd say this is well-written. Keep it up.
It is amazing that God can use any of us and any time! You might want to carefully edit your piece for punctuation and spelling errors. Keep on writing!
09/10/19
I see an entry with heart and a great message. Thank you!
I enjoyed this piece,
Blessings~
I can really relate to this piece. I wish everyone with horrible self-esteem could read this. I really think you should tweak it a bit, find someone to edit it, and submit it somewhere. You make some great points.