The Official Writing Challenge
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This is well thought out. Personally, I think "all thumbs" would be more apt than
'fingers and thumbs" but, it's a minor point and I may be wrong.
This is a clever way of presenting the armor of God. It's well written and causes me to reflect on how/when I don't put on His armor and how letting one piece slip paves the way for the other pieces to slip. Thank the Lord for this lesson.
A beautiful allegory, well written and thought provoking.
Great job with the topic in delivery and content!
Wow! I really could feel your pain! Your imagery is spot on. I've never considered the armor as being on too loose-well done!
Congrats on your win on this well-written piece. Beautiful writing. Great job.
Very descriptive and challenging message - and well-deserving of your win. Congratulations!
I thought this was a fresh approach to the armor of God

It was a well-written piece.

Certainly deserving of the 1st place finish for EC.