The Official Writing Challenge
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I enjoyed reading this and loved the fact that you put the Gospel in a nutshell in the last two verses. A good reminder, especially at Easter of what Jesus did for us. Bless you
Well said and done.
And I'm so glad He did!
It was good to see you having a go at this difficult topic. It was also good to see you use the medium of poetry.
What makes a piece of writing a poem is a long and complicated debate but what I would encourage you to do is to consider the rules you have chosen to employ. For example if lines one an two rhyme, and lines three and four rhyme try to ensure that this happens in every verse.
It would also be worth researching how poems scan.
Poetry is a great creative palette continue to enjoy honing your skills.
All the best
This is a great take on the topic with a powerful message. Congratulations on ranking 6th in your level. The highest rankings can be found on the message boards.