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This story had a nice flow to it. I was hoping Cathy would be able to visit her aunt even though she may not remember her. Even though her aunt may not remember, Cathy would reminder for a lifetime.

I liked the idea of a telephone conversation. Well done.
Awww...touching and well done.

God bless~
I thought this was quite clever. I enjoyed it. Nice job.
I'm glad the narrator was so patient with her Aunt Angie. It is difficult when someone repeats him or herself over and over.

Well written.
You did a great job of bringing aunt Angie to life through the telephone conversations. It was easy to visualise the old lady with dementia, and your patience with her was heart-warming. A lovely story for the topic. Well done!
You captured not only my attention - but you've won my heart. This is so touching, and I am so glad Aunt Ang has you . . .
You did a very good job with "showing" the topic.
Congratulations, Judy, on your highly commendable story in the Intermediate Category. I thought you handled this topic in an original way.