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This story had a nice flow to it. I was hoping Cathy would be able to visit her aunt even though she may not remember her. Even though her aunt may not remember, Cathy would reminder for a lifetime.

I liked the idea of a telephone conversation. Well done.
03/11/16
Awww...touching and well done.

God bless~
03/11/16
I thought this was quite clever. I enjoyed it. Nice job.
03/12/16
I'm glad the narrator was so patient with her Aunt Angie. It is difficult when someone repeats him or herself over and over.

Well written.
03/13/16
You did a great job of bringing aunt Angie to life through the telephone conversations. It was easy to visualise the old lady with dementia, and your patience with her was heart-warming. A lovely story for the topic. Well done!
You captured not only my attention - but you've won my heart. This is so touching, and I am so glad Aunt Ang has you . . .
You did a very good job with "showing" the topic.
03/17/16
Congratulations, Judy, on your highly commendable story in the Intermediate Category. I thought you handled this topic in an original way.