The Official Writing Challenge
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Perhaps it is me, but I can't see the forest for the trees. It is well written, but I am confused as to whether this is about a human baby, or that humans are like part of the forest? I liked it, just couldn't get my dense brain to see clearly what was happening. When I have time I will come back to this one - as it is intriguing, well written and somehow beautiful.
For most of the piece, I thought you were writing about Adam and Eve. That seems not to be the case. Who are these people?

Your way with words is undeniable--this is just a little bit cryptic.
I have read that a Sylvan is a forest diety or forrest spirit. Is this what you are referring to? I can't make a lot of sense from this. Sorry--interesting to read, but left me confused.