The Official Writing Challenge
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A great read! However, it get's a little confusing "who" says "what", as the quotes are all together. Perhaps "italics" for one tree would make it more obvious which tree was speaking. A wonderful way of expressing this particular Scripture! Very well done, I liked it and it kept me interested until the end. Creative and beautifully written.
What a beautiful allegory! Separate lines of dialog, please. This is top-notch writing!
So many entries about talking trees, oh well the message is still good.
I get the message, especially with the scripture at the end, but it was a difficult read. I was too "flowery" and didn't flow naturally. It felt "forced", if that makes sense.