The Official Writing Challenge
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Well done! Good story telling.

God bless~
The imagery was a fun way to search for answers.

Your article would be easier to read in paragraphs. I could see where it looks like you tried to do this but it didn't transmit as you likely intended.

When you paste your copy into the box and preview, check that the extra returns are in place. It will make for easier reading.

Nice job
Interesting piece, artistic layout. Nicely intertwined with historic characters. Yeah... Watch out of the paragraph thingy.

I liked the fact that you did not use the word of the week yet you dance all around it.

Looking for things and finding things does not bring peace. Peace is given as a gift in return for a trusting faith in our creator.

The question is: "How can we be/live an example to others so they will find this peace?"

God bless~
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Great story! Congrats!
Congratulations, Shanta... Great writing and a memorable lesson. Well deserved!