The Official Writing Challenge
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04/11/14
Wow - This story gave me chills at the ending! I LOVED IT. Powerful, moving, intensely grouding, along with a prfound and authentic tone throughout.

Great job with this. I hope the judges will take note.

God bless~
04/11/14
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Wow - This story gave me chills at the ending! I LOVED IT. Powerful, moving, intensely grounding, along with a profound and authentic tone throughout.

Great job with this. I hope the judges will take note.

God bless~
04/15/14
Very well done - was definitely not expecting the twist, Would have loved a TINY bit of foreshadowing to it (unless I missed it, which is entirely possible).

Moving story. Thanks!
You developed a situation nicely - very expressively from one point of view.

When the whole story was told, you had a teaching moment.

This setting is good for us to think about when we come face to face with this in our lives. What will we do? What is in our hearts ahead of time usually determines the outcome.

Well written. Good for all to think about.

What incident in my life do I need to forgive another person.
04/17/14
Congrats Matt!
I loved this story
God bless~
04/24/14
Great story, congrats!
04/24/14
Great story, congrats!