The Official Writing Challenge
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You have quite a creative concept for the topic. I like that. Your story telling ability shows great potential. A suggestion I have is that you would have someone else proof-read to help pinpoint the mispelled and or incorrectly used words, such as "contraction" when I think you meant "contraption". Keep writing. I think you have more stories to tell!
This is a nice story. You have a few typos, but I liked how you showed we can get caught in our own wilderness, while the world is going on around us.
Lovely story. Apart from some grammar and spelling mistakes, this is a good story.
Perhaps you could ask someone to check your story once written. Keep going as you have a lovely style.
What a story. We live in our own little world and miss so many things until we stop and look around. I enjoyed this. Good job.
02/15/11
i loved this story of the old prospector. Thanks for telling it. I wonder how he will get on back in society!
02/15/11
Thanks for sharing an interesting entry.