The Official Writing Challenge
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09/03/06
You have some wonderful ideas here - work a bit on grammar and form (is this meant to be a poem? You have several rhymes in it but it is not laid out like one) and it will be even better!
09/03/06
this had an uplifting spirit throughout, and a lot of wonderful ideas and images.