The Official Writing Challenge
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09/03/06
I love your title and last paragraph! Very nice! You might get more readers if you separate your paragraphs. PM me if you need help with that!
09/04/06
Excellent idea and well told. I enjoyed the concept and your way of telling it was very interesting.

I agree that the piece might flow better if the paragraphs were separated.
09/04/06
I like how this piece flowed. The idea is great.
09/13/06
This was one entry that touched my soul and had an impact on my life. As a judge for this particular week I would have loved to have seen it soar to the top. But, when someone's writing places in someone's heart, and life - it's the best place to recieve. It's a winner in their heart - like mine. Good job Donn.