The Official Writing Challenge
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I love your title and last paragraph! Very nice! You might get more readers if you separate your paragraphs. PM me if you need help with that!
Excellent idea and well told. I enjoyed the concept and your way of telling it was very interesting.

I agree that the piece might flow better if the paragraphs were separated.
I like how this piece flowed. The idea is great.
This was one entry that touched my soul and had an impact on my life. As a judge for this particular week I would have loved to have seen it soar to the top. But, when someone's writing places in someone's heart, and life - it's the best place to recieve. It's a winner in their heart - like mine. Good job Donn.