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Oh...really sweet and tender thoughts here. Well executed rhythm and flow. Overall, a touching outpouring. I especially liked this stanza:

"More burdened hearts chime in, sing out,
Lift up their songs to heaven’s door,
Petition Healer’s tender touch,
To see their sister’s heart restored."

This speaks of a burdened sister in Christ who is lifted above her pain by the functioning (active) body of Christ. Very inspirational. :-)



Oh, the richness of this beautiful verse!! The imagery comparing friends' prayers and support to a lovely melody is exquisite! I love this poem. Its message is straight from the heart, and its perfect rhythm and rhyme are pure melody indeed. Bravo!!!
09/03/06
very lovely and it touched my heart.
09/03/06
I very well painted picture of comfort in times of pain... The answered prayer while in the struggles of life Shows itself quite clearly. Good job.