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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 1 – Beginner)
Topic: BEAT AROUND THE BUSH (05/25/17)
Quit beating around the bush, God is waiting on you with forgiving arms waiting on you. Don't today go away without you letting Him in your heart.



Quit beating around the bush, stop being a follower and stop being a crowd pleaser. Your friends aren't your friends if you got to follow their beliefs. Real friends accept you as you are.



Quit beating around the bush, we don't know when our savior will come to receive his church and judgement to the non-believers.



Quit beating around the bush, praise God with a pure heart trusting in His will. He is a loving God, a caring God, a forgiving God, and a God who cares.



Quit beating around the bush, stop believing in the wrong things. He is real, He'll never forsake you, never leave you, and He's their in times of sorrow.



Quit beating around the bush, He's waiting, not judging, always forgiving, and caring for your needs. He's a friend when you have none. Listen to your woes and concerns​.
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Eneida Moscon
06/01/17

Lovely, filled with encouraging words.

Poetic with rhythmic sentences.

Well done!

Blessings
Rebecca Bithyah
06/02/17
I enjoyed the rhythmic repetition of the lead phrase. It kept me interested and wanting to read on to see where you went.
There were some grammar errors. Have you ever used Grammarly? It's brilliant and free. It would have picked them up. Just search for it on the web and you'll find it.
Your sweet words about God's love have given me a lift. We all need to hear them again and again.
Thanks for the read.

Shann Hall-LochmannVanBennekom 
06/03/17
This is quite lovely. Even though I'm not musical, I could picture this in a song. Watch for little things like the misuse of got (use have instead), there instead of their, and repeating caring and care. Those are tiny things though and don't subtract from your powerful message. I think with a bit of tweaking, you could do some amazing things with it. Great job.
Karen Emmer
06/05/17
I really like your take on beating around the bush. So many think it's okay to put off making a decision for Christ.
There are a couple of places where I felt punctuation was needed for clarity, but maybe not?
Bonnie Bowden 
06/08/17
I liked the rhythmic quality. You delivered a powerful message in a short time.
Bonnie Bowden 
06/08/17
Congratulations on your 3rd place finish in the Beginners category.