The Official Writing Challenge
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Your poem is simply scrumptious. You painted a lovely picture with your words. You're truly an artist.
02/14/16
I liked this tribute to nature. Your poem was very descriptive.
02/15/16
Beautiful!
02/17/16
Mesmerizingly beautiful!

Blessings~
02/18/16
Gorgeous imagery!
02/18/16
I agree with the others, nicely written.
It evokes a hint of delicious very subtlety. Almost so small that I nearly missed it.
Maybe a concluding line that displayed how your soul felt this is delicious.
Still a nice poem!
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