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05/29/15
I enjoyed this action packed story that you brought to life with the chariot race.
05/30/15
Great rendering of a wonderful Bible story! You may want to up the status of your entry next time to advanced...
05/30/15
Action packed retelling of the story of Phillip and the Ethiopian. I especially liked the line: Solace was found with the ones he had been taught to fear, and fear came from those who were meant to give solace.

Think about how different Africa would be now with about the obedience to God from these men of faith.

Thoroughly enjoyed reading!
You did a fine job of bringing this to life. I think it's a great take on the topic. I also think this would be great to teach people about Pentecost. With some tweaking, it would make a great Sunday school lesson.