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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 1 – Beginner)
Topic: LUST (all-consuming desire; excessive craving) (01/08/15)
The article is meant to explain lust and how it is processed in the brain to the point of action. It is meant to empower all readers when they go through the Scripture. It could also challenge the reader on those cognitive process that they can be controlled through the practice of mental consciousness and practising the law of love.
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Shann Hall-LochmannVanBennekom 
01/15/15
My heart aches for you that your entire piece didn't get printed. It can happen to the best of us. I've learned a great trick. I don't fill in the title space or level number until I'm absolutely certain the piece is just like I want it. That way if I accidentally hit submit instead of preview, it won't go through. I often end up hitting preview several times while I find errors I didn't see before.

As a bit of a constructive critique, I'm guessing you didn't need that beginning part telling the reader what you intended to say. Instead just start off with the main article. I bet it'll be crystal clear to the reader what your point or message is.

You can always submit the entire article in the general submission sections and then leave a note on the message boards explaining what happened and asking for feedback.

I look forward to reading it and more of your work too.
C D Swanson 
01/15/15
Awww! Sorry about this!
Perhaps you can show it in "regular article" section so we could perhaps read it in the future.

God bless~