The Official Writing Challenge
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08/01/05
Very wonderful entry! I think children often have a better grasp on life and faith than adults. They can teach us very well--enjoyed reading. God bless ya, littlelight
08/01/05
Good visuals, beautiful little girl inside and out! Nice flow to conversation. Entertaining yet progresses well to the point. Let the kids come to me.
I liked this. God bless and keep writing!
This was so very precious. Wonderful truth taught by a child! Well done pictures of how she shows her maturity beyond her years. Thank you for sharing!
08/02/05
Very nice work, well thought out and well written. Great job!
08/02/05
"Out of the mouths of babes" come great wisdom, if we'd only listen. Very good story.
08/03/05
Great :) Kids know more than we give them credit for :)
Lovely! A reminder never to underestimate the intelligence of a child, and told with simplicity and honesty. Enjoyed it very much. Love, light and God bless.
What a wonderful story! Thanks for sharing your talent. Children are wonderful teachers!