The Official Writing Challenge
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08/01/05
Wonderful way to space your memories. Very nice! God bless ya, littlelight
08/02/05
I don't know much about this form of 'poetry' or writing but you sure got your point across.
08/03/05
What a wonderful adventure -that I'm sure is just getting better :)
08/07/05
I liked this. I was nervous with the opening stanza but it hooked me. I think it bogged just a touch in the middle but the rythm / pace picked up after that. It is a very unique writing style. Not typical poetry but not story either. Captivating!