The Official Writing Challenge
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08/01/05
Nicely written, good descriptions. I believe paragraph separations would have made this more readable. Good story. God bless ya, littlelight
08/02/05
Followed subject well. Ditto on the paragraph separations. If you are planning to publish, remove the 'was' words. Keep up the good work.
08/03/05
Well written -I liked the ending :)
08/07/05
this is a great article all you need to do is just get yourself some formation and you will be on your way may the blessings of God be stored upon you and your writings