The Official Writing Challenge
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That's a good word and well written. Thank you.
"...until we acknowledge we have fallen." So true. Yes, we all need a Savior every hour of our lives. Very encouraging post.
10/26/18
You're right. It's not about if or when we fall. It's about getting up again and moving forward. Good job.
10/28/18
This was a well-thought out piece from beginning to end, especially for a beginner. It is a worthwhile admonition - worth perfecting.
Watch out for sentences that can be read as saying the opposite of what you mean. I tripped over these two: Not failing is our most grievous sin?? Really??
'We can never believe the lie that we are above being rescued. . .' Can't we?? A lot of people DO believe that lie. I know what you meant, but the reader shouldn't have to re-read the sentence. You made a great start and these are easy fixes.
This is a powerful sermon. I could hear you speaking directly to my heart. I thoroughly enjoyed your fresh take on the topic. Congratulations on ranking 1st in your level and 12th overall. The highest rankings can be found on the message boards.