The Official Writing Challenge
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10/18/18
This will preach and teach -- such a good lesson and reminder. God bless.
Good thoughts and well written.
10/19/18
Good job developing the lesson in this piece with the oranges. I wasn't quite sure where the lemons fit in or what distinction you were making between the lemons and oranges. Otherwise, well done.
10/19/18
I enjoyed this very much. Great truths here - thanks for sharing. Well-written and clear.
10/19/18
You have opened up a positive challenge that could prove to be very 'fruitful,' even more fruitful with a touch of personal experience - of your own or of sonmeone else.
10/20/18
The truths and ideas in your article are wonderful! I like how you equated our resources with oranges to parallel the whole "when life gives you lemons..." idea.
Simplify. Simplify. Your orange analogy makes sense, but you can leave out the lemon. I believe this could be a good devotional if you edited down to 300 words. I encourage you to give it a try.