The Official Writing Challenge
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10/18/18
This will preach and teach -- such a good lesson and reminder. God bless.
Good thoughts and well written.
10/19/18
Good job developing the lesson in this piece with the oranges. I wasn't quite sure where the lemons fit in or what distinction you were making between the lemons and oranges. Otherwise, well done.
10/19/18
I enjoyed this very much. Great truths here - thanks for sharing. Well-written and clear.
10/19/18
You have opened up a positive challenge that could prove to be very 'fruitful,' even more fruitful with a touch of personal experience - of your own or of sonmeone else.
10/20/18
The truths and ideas in your article are wonderful! I like how you equated our resources with oranges to parallel the whole "when life gives you lemons..." idea.
10/21/18
Simplify. Simplify. Your orange analogy makes sense, but you can leave out the lemon. I believe this could be a good devotional if you edited down to 300 words. I encourage you to give it a try.