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10/18/18
There's so much truth in this poem. God bless.
10/19/18
Good job presenting the idea in this poem.
I don't know much about poetry but it seems it might flow a little better if you were to take out some of the unnecessary words and keep the syllable count more consistent.
Well written thoughts about prayer.
I liked your rhymes.
10/19/18
Really enjoyed the poem.
the inclusion of battle of the mind from the enemy was powerful and oh so true!
10/19/18
I enjoyed this sweet poem about our prayers not being wasted. Thanks for sharing this! Good work.
10/19/18
Poetry is not easy to master, but you have expressed some strong ideas very clearly and concisely.
10/20/18
Very powerful truth presented here! Some of the rhythm and meter needs a bit of tweaking but the message is perfect.
Just what I needed to hear today. Thank you.