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There's so much truth in this poem. God bless.
Good job presenting the idea in this poem.
I don't know much about poetry but it seems it might flow a little better if you were to take out some of the unnecessary words and keep the syllable count more consistent.
Well written thoughts about prayer.
I liked your rhymes.
Really enjoyed the poem.
the inclusion of battle of the mind from the enemy was powerful and oh so true!
I enjoyed this sweet poem about our prayers not being wasted. Thanks for sharing this! Good work.
Poetry is not easy to master, but you have expressed some strong ideas very clearly and concisely.
Very powerful truth presented here! Some of the rhythm and meter needs a bit of tweaking but the message is perfect.
Just what I needed to hear today. Thank you.