The Official Writing Challenge
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06/14/18
Good job presenting the mundane aspects of your life, as well as what brings you joy. I would have enjoyed greater descriptions about how the creative elements bring you joy, help connect you to God, counter the mundane...
06/15/18
Ah...changing the cat litter...what fun! All of us succumb to those wonderful routine tasks! There were a few words that needed replacing (me for my, etc.)but enjoyed your submission. I have a very nice proofreader that works with me from FW, and we have become good friends. This might encourage you in your writing too. Good job!
06/15/18
I can relate. I like the examples giving me a window into your frustrations.
07/19/18
Most of the time, I feel like a caterpillar, stuck on the ground, looking up and hoping to be a butterfly. Then a reality kick hits me aside the head and reminds me all them butterflies used to be a caterpillar like me. I'll abide my time being the best caterpillar I can be until my time has come. Your time will also come!