The Official Writing Challenge
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03/09/17
Wow! Crazy stuff!

Red Ink: try reading your article aloud, word for word to find missing articles and such.
03/10/17
03/10/17
Oh my goodness you've been through quite a battle in both physical and spiritual realms.

Thank you for sharing your story with us, praise God and His Sovereign power and grace for delivering you.

Blessings to you~
03/10/17
Thank God you got set free. You went through a lot.
03/11/17
You certainly went through a lot of heartache. I think you did well on the topic. A few ideas for future writing. It read like a newspaper. You could have added dialogue to bring life to it. Telling instead of showing by action or dialogue makes it dry. My suggestion would have used the bull incident as an enticing hook to get the readers interested on what follows, i.e., "One of my legs was facing north, the other, south. I could still hear the snorting of this crazed beast, This was only the beginning." Just my thoughts. God bless.
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03/12/17
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This is a positive testimony. Often when telling a story, it is hard to know what facts are vital to the reader. They are all in your head and seen very important, but since there is so much information, I'd urge you to focus and expand on just a small section and save the rest for another time. I'd also urge you to read and comment on at least 5 challenges each day. You will be amazed how that helps you grow as a writer, I can feel your passion and I've no doubt God has great plans for you. I know of a Fiction book by fellow FW, which God is urging me you to read. I think he has plans for you and the author. It is called <i>Sow the Wind.</i> I don't usually do this, but God's instruction us clear. God bless. http://ebooks.faithwriters.com/ebook-details.php?id=1262
Wow, what a testimony. Congrats on your win.
03/16/17
Congratulations on your 1st place win in the Beginners category and move up into the Intermediate category, Robert.

It amazed me that this was a true story. God must have seen a great leader and a dedicated heart to His service in you.

In the first paragraph, Each believed [he] ... I also had no idea what an advert is.


Keep writing.