The Official Writing Challenge
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07/14/16
Lovely. I enjoyed this. God bless.
This has a powerful message. Poetry isn't my strongest genre. While I think you did a fantastic job, at points I had a difficult time following it. I'm sure what appeared to me as missing words were important to the rhythm and meter of the piece. I'm tone deaf so struggle with that a lot. You drew me in right away and your message is clear and beautiful. How blessed we are to have Jesus commute our sentence. Great job.
07/15/16
Beautifully told, with a real message. Thanks for this.
07/21/16
Congratulations, Caleb, on placing 2nd place in the Beginners category.

It had some beautiful sentiments.