The Official Writing Challenge
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06/03/16
I liked this, but I think you needed a more catchy start. Nothing wrong with a Bible verse, but even re-arranging it's location in the first paragraph might have drawn me in more. I liked the ending.
This is great. I need this message right now too. I don't like the way I look, yet like you pointed out, Jesus loves me and has great plans ahead of me. Tiny red ink: it should be the '70s,' 80s, and '90s. That's nothing though in this heart-felt message. You really touched my heart.