The Official Writing Challenge
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06/03/16
This was a beautiful,poignant story. I loved it,from start to finish.
This is a touching reminiscence,with engaging sensory descriptions.
This is a beautiful story of love and bereavement. You did a wonderful job of capturing the MC's pain, but also is hope to be reunited one day in heaven. Lovely.
06/09/16
Congratulations, Dennis, on placing 2nd place in the Beginners category.

Your wife seems to be a wonderful woman. I liked your ending because it showed your future hope of seeing her.
06/09/16
Congratulations, Dennis, on winning a 5th place EC award.
Congratulations, Dennis, on your 5th place EC!
06/11/16
Congratulations, Dennis, on your EC for this touching and well-told story.
06/23/16
You crafted a multi faceted tale that was interesting from beginning to end.