The Official Writing Challenge
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07/24/15
Good imagination. You have a lot of compound sentences (I think that's what you call them) where commas needed to go. Be careful of that.
07/25/15
Interesting piece with a lot to think about. Well done.

God bless~
An interesting take on the topic as the photograph comes to life. It is almost like a motion picture come to life. If you could have someone else read your stories, it may cut down on grammical error such as run on sentences.
Congratulations on your honorable mention in the beginning level.
07/31/15
John,
Congratulations!
Well done.
GOd bless~